I won't be impatient, tell me what you think?

Strikes a chord for us who have not given up; who believe in a home coming that is truly sinking into warm welcoming arms. This poem is very good, meaningful. Please don't let the soulless critics cause you to stop writing. If you will look, you'll see that they only like the lines that are reminiscent of songs they hear! They are afraid of authenticity it has to be a "known" game, movie, book, whatever, they seek the approval of others, don't- write what touches your heart, they can't hear it--but others can and appreciate it. Good work!